The Five Stages of Editing
by Cassandra Carr
You’ve probably heard writers talking about being in their “writing cave” or “editing cave”, but did you ever wonder what exactly we’re doing in there? You can see it involves a lot of caffeine and swearing, but other than that, the process is a mystery, right? I’m here to give you some insight into the editing process, told strictly from my point of view. Your mileage may vary.
First stage: Denial
I’ve got plenty of time to get those edits in. Rather than doing them, I think I’ll watch more episodes of Queer As Folk (great show, by the way, if you’ve never seen it).
Second stage: Anger
Why did that pesky editor give me so freaking many changes to make?!? Doesn’t she know I need to finish this disc of Queer As Folk so I can send it back to Netflix? Surely my writing doesn’t need this amount of work!
Third stage: Bargaining
I bet if I email my editor and tell her I’m working REALLY HARD on the changes, she’ll give me an extension to finish them. Also, if my family doesn’t eat a few meals because I’m too busy editing to make dinner, well, we could all use fewer calories, right?
Fourth stage: Depression
I’m NEVER going to get these changes done. My book release will be pushed back, my editor will be mad at me, and my contract will be terminated. Why did I ever think I could do this?
Fifth stage: Acceptance
Whew! Finally got them! Now I can send the manuscript back to my editor and emerge from my editing cave triumphant! Then I will pour myself a huge martini and watch the entirety of Queer As Folk that just arrived in my mailbox.
Yeah, that’s pretty much how it happens…but don’t tell any of my editors that. They all think I’m working my fingers to the bone! We’ll let this be our little secret, k?
BLURB FOR IMPACT:
Professional bull rider Conner Raub hides a secret from the world. Heâs a Dom. When he meets a submissive on tour who pulls at his Dom tendencies, he fights to deny his true self, believing his colleagues will condemn his lifestyle.
Jessica Talbot is new to the BDSM scene and the bull riding tour, but after seeing Conner come to the aid of a submissive being mistreated in a club, she sets out to have him for her own. After their first night together she asks him to train her to submit and he refuses, afraid to mix business with pleasure. But Jessica isnât deterred. Sheâll do whatever it takes to make him realize he can have it allâa career, true love, and the BDSM lifestyle he craves.
EXCERPT:
Conner packed up the last of his stuff and threw it into the duffel bag. The first event of the new season was starting in a few days and he was flying out to New York City later tonight. He was looking forward to meeting up with his best friend Brady Parrish. His mind flashed back to the previous evening at Decadence. He wished he could tell Brady about the BDSM lifestyle he wanted. Brady was a great guy and wouldnât judge him, so maybe he would some day, but how do you bring something like that up?
Hey dude, pass me the rosin. By the way, I like to tie women up, spank their asses red, and then have them suck my cock to thank me for it.
He rolled his eyes.
Yeah, right. No big deal.
He couldnât tell anyone on the tour about his lifestyle preferences. The NBT wasnât exactly the most liberal-minded sport around. After all, many of the riders, as well as the officials and executives were from the Bible-beltinâ South. It was bad enough evidently many of the riders had been aware he and Brady sometimes shared womenâhe didnât need word of this getting out. It could ruin his career. The NBT was all about family and hardworking values, not Doms and whips and spreader bars.
His cell phone rang, jolting him back to the present. âYeah?â
âYeah? Nice greeting,â Brady replied.
âSorry,â Conner answered. âMy mind was a million miles away. Whatâs up, dude?â
âJust wanted to find out what time youâre getting in tomorrow. Iâve got a rental, so I can swing by and pick you up.â
âYou donât have to do that. I was gonna take a cab.â
âNot necessary. Besides, then you can buy me dinner. What time does your flight get in?â
âHold on.â He rummaged through his stuff until he produced his ticket. âNine fifteen. US Air, Kennedy.â
âCool. See you then.â
* * * * *
Jessica loaded her computer into her messenger bag and headed out onto the event floor. She still had four stock contractors to find before she could relax and watch the competition. Her co-liaison had said the first event was always crazy and this one was certainly living up to its hype. Between the new contractors, new bulls, and the new herâwell, not exactly new, but new to this âfirst eventâ stuff, she was about to blow a gasket.
Jessica had known when sheâd taken the position she might encounter some old-fashioned attitudes regarding her ability to do her job, but she was still astounded at how often it happened. She knew bullsâher daddy was a cattle rancher. She knew all about the different breeds, and why one breed was preferred for one job over another. She understood which made a good bull-riding bull, and how to pick one in a draft based on what you needed to get out of the ride. But it didnât matter. Some of these assholes saw her big boobs and figured she was here as eye candy.
Spotting Jack Tucker, she hurried after him. âMr. Tucker,â she called. She was gaining on him but he appeared to be ignoring her. âMr. Tucker. Â Iâm Jessica, the liaison from the NBT. We met last season? I need to go over a couple of things with you.â Sheâd just caught up with him by this time and she glanced over to see if he was listening at all.
âI turned in my paperwork,â he replied as he kept walking. âNow get outta my way, girlie. Iâve got stuff to do.â He spit a stream of tobacco right in front of her and Jessica had to consciously try not to flinch. It wasnât the first time sheâd seen tobacco being spit, but to know heâd purposely done it right where sheâd be walkingâick. Heâd done a similar thing last year and was obviously trying to intimidate her, but was barking up the wrong tree if he thought she was going to slink away like some chastised dog.
âMr. Tucker,â she began, trying to keep her voice down and even. âYou left a few pieces of your paperwork blank and I need to have those parts filled in.â
âIâve been doinâ paperwork for the tour for longer ân youâve been alive, girlie,â he said. âIâve never had a problem.â
Jessica took a deep breath and tried again. âWeâre putting the bulls into a database. Without information like year of birth, weight, etcetera, our database will be incomplete. If you just take a few moments of your time to look at your records Iâll leave you alone.â
He stopped and turned to her. âThis tourâs gettinâ to be more of a pain in the ass every year.â He stabbed a finger in her general direction. âPeople like you cominâ in and tryinâ to change everything. Modernize, you say. Well, I say if the system ainât broke, donât fuck with it.â Jessica decided sheâd had enough after she saw his pompous expression.
âMr. Tucker, you have one hour to have this information to my colleague, Rick OâMeara, in the Officialâs Room. If you donât, I will disqualify your bulls.â Spinning on her heel, she began to walk away, forcing herself not to run. Before she got ten feet, though, a rough hand gripped her arm.
âWhat did you say, you little bitch?â He squeezed and she gasped from the pain.
Before she could process anything further Conner was there, prying the manâs fingers off her arm. âGet your fuckinâ hands off her.â
She looked up at him. His lips were set in a thin line and his eyes were as dark and stormy as one of the Texas tornadoes sheâd seen dozens of times living on the Panhandle.
Tucker released her. âIâd suggest you go find the information the lady requested,â Conner growled, getting in the other manâs personal space. Since Conner had a good eight inches and at least seventy pounds on the man, he backed down immediately.
âThis isnât over,â he told her, then turned and stalked away.
Conner lifted her arm. âHe hurt you.â It wasnât a question.
âItâs not a big deal,â she answered. A profound sense of gratitude swept through her body and as she stared up at his eyes, which had darkened even further as he looked back at her, she felt as if she could drown in them. Normally sheâd prefer to fight her own battles, but she didnât know what Tucker would have done to her if Conner hadnât intervened. She shivered.
Her skin felt searing hot where his fingers touched it, and whether from the leftover adrenaline of the situation or from her reaction to him she didnât know, but her breath was coming fast and furious, making her look like a panting fool. His gaze flickered down to her breasts and then slowly returned to her face.
âI saw the whole thing. You have to report him. He canât be treating you like that. You were just doing your job and he wasnât doing his.â
She was mortified heâd witnessed such an embarrassing situation. Jessica was afraid he would go tell the tour she couldnât handle herself and sheâd be out of a job. Even with all the crap she had to take, she loved this job. If she couldâve been a bull rider she wouldâve, but sheâd been cursed with the wrong DNA, so she did what she could to be close to the sport. She looked down, sighing. âDonât worry about it,â she mumbled, dropping her eyes.
He grabbed her chin and forced her to look at him again. Her pussy heated as she remembered how heâd done the same thing to his sub that night at Decadence. âI am worried about it, and youâre not gonna waylay me.â
âConner, please.â She bit her lip to keep from saying anything else. She had a feeling saying âConner, please kiss me, please make me yours, I want youâ wouldnât go over very well.
He took a giant step back then and dropped his hand. âI apologize. I donât even know your name and here I am touching you. I have no right.â
You can touch me all you wantâŚ
But since she couldnât say that, instead she held out her hand. âJessica Talbot.â
âConner Raub, but I guess you know that,â he replied, grinning as he took her hand in his much larger, work-roughened one.
âYes,â she confessed, her face flaming. She hoped her interest wasnât written all over her face.
âI donât think Iâve seen you around here. You new?â
âI came on board around the middle of last season when Steven had his heart attack.â
Conner nodded. âSteven worked too hard. It looks like you do too.â He studied her face and then his eyes narrowed. âDo you have the power to disqualify his bulls?â
âNo, but if I told the officials to they would.â
âJust like that, without an explanation?â
âOf course not, but if I told them he withheld information I requested they would disqualify him. Theyâre cracking down on that stuff this season.â
âSo you were ready to make an example outta him?â
Jessica shrugged. âI did what I had to do.â And now what she needed to do was get away from Conner Raub. âAnyway, I still need to find three other contractors. Thank you for coming to my rescue. I hope we can keep this between usâI donât want people thinking I canât handle myself around here.â
Connerâs jaw tightened. âI donât like the idea of him getting away with mauling you.â He stepped closer and Jessica felt her nipples tighten against the lacy confines of her bra. Thankfully she needed a sturdy bra to give her large breasts the support they needed, so her arousal didnât show. That wouldâve been more than she couldâve handled. Yes, she wanted Conner, but not like this. She needed time to figure out how to seduce him in her own way, in her own time.
âIâll let you go, on one condition,â he told her. âI wanna see your arm later tonight. If itâs bruised youâre gonna report him. Iâll come with you.â His tone brooked no argument and her sex flooded with more moisture. His nostrils flared and her face flamed. Could he smell her?
She turned away, calling over her shoulder, âOkay, thanks again,â as she fled as fast as her legs would take her.
Conner felt as if heâd been kicked in the chest by an ornery bull. Heâd been walking back to the ridersâ prep area after registering when heâd come upon Jessica and that guy. When sheâd said sheâd disqualify the assholeâs bulls heâd silently cheered, loving the way sheâd stood up to him. He wanted a submissive in the bedroom, but a girl with spunk outside it was so much more entertaining.
But the guy had gone and grabbed her and Conner had seen red. After heâd sent the guy packing Jessica had looked up at him like some kind of hero and his dick had instantly gone rock hard. Trying to avoid her eyes heâd looked down, only to see her gorgeous, lush breasts heaving and heâd almost lost it. Only through sheer force of will heâd garnered through his years of being a Dom had he been able to drag his gaze back up to her face.
Then heâd touched her chin, and sheâd said please and bitten her lip, and heâd moved away so fast heâd probably left skid marks with his boots lest he act on what his brain had started screaming at him. In that moment heâd seen what this woman wasâa natural submissive. Heâd automatically reverted to how a Dom would treat a sub. Heâd apologized for touching her without permission. But all sheâd done was stuck out her hand to shake his, so heâd ignored his still-screaming brain and introduced himself as if nothing out of the ordinary was happening.
And he thought heâd gotten away with his sanity until heâd told her he wanted to see her arm later. Even from a foot or more away heâd smelled the force of her arousal after heâd issued the commandâanother sign she was submissive. Heâd very nearly lost his cool and then she was gone.
Rubbing his face, he continued toward the prep area. When he arrived, Brady was already there. âDude, you okay? You look like youâve seen a ghost.â
âFine,â Conner answered. He placed his gear bag on the table in front of him and began to pull out everything to inspect it.
âNervous?â
âYeah.â He figured that was the easiest explanation he could give for why he looked shaken up. He sure as hell felt shaken up, but he needed to get his head in the game fast or this event would be all over for him.
Brady left him alone while they finished their prep work. Then they took their stuff up to the area behind the chutes and settled in to watch. When Bradyâs turn rolled around, Conner provided his usual assistance getting him situated on his bull and helping him loop his bull rope underneath the bullâs massive girth and bring it up the other side. He was pushing the bull away from the near fence when he felt the hairs on the back of his neck stand up. He ignored the feeling for the moment and concentrated on his friend. When Brady nodded he let go and Brady and the bull went careening out of the chute.
Brady held on for the full eight seconds and then scrambled off the back of the still-bucking bull, landing on his shoulder and rolling left, away from the pounding hooves. He sprang up and ran toward the rail. Conner reached his hand out and grabbed Bradyâs biceps, ready to pull him over if need be. The bull fighters got the beast corralled, though, and both he and Brady directed their attention to the scoreboard.
âLadies and gentlemen, that was last yearâs winner, Brady Parrish, the King of Rodeo, ridinâ Extremist.â There was a pause. âLooks like Bradyâs picking up where he left off last year. He scores an 89.5. That puts Brady in first place with five riders remaining.â
âGood for you,â Conner said, clapping his best friend on the back. âBut Iâm gonna beat your ass.â Finally he allowed himself to turn around. Standing not thirty feet from him, looking at him as if he were a dessert buffet and she was a starving chocoholic, was Jessica. She licked her lips and Conner barely stifled a groan. His dick took notice and he ruthlessly forced it back down. Riding with a hard-on was a bad idea for a whole bunch of reasons, not the least of which was the riders didnât wear cups and getting bounced around on a bull while sporting a boner was bound to be a very unpleasant experience. He allowed himself to stare her down for a moment before touching the brim of his hat in a silent salute and turning back to the chutes.
When it was his turn to ride he was thankfully able to focus and stayed on for the full eight seconds, scoring a 90 and taking over first place. After completing his turn and picking up his bull rope from one of the bull fighters, he climbed over the rail. Now his ride was done, and he wanted to see Jessicaâs arm. He had a feeling there would be a clear handprint visible on her pale skin. While that thought would have turned him on if it was his handprint on her ass and she was a willing participant, it made him want to kill if that bastard had hurt her. How often did she get manhandled? He intended to get some answers.
Looking around, though, he didnât see her. Accepting congratulations from his fellow riders, he continued to scan the area around him. Where had she gone off to? Now he was pissed. She knew he wanted a look at her arm. Was she avoiding him? After the look sheâd given him a few minutes ago, that possibility seemed unlikely, but maybe sheâd run like a scared jackrabbit. Wouldnât be the first time heâd scared off a woman when they got a peek at his dominant side. Maybe it was for the best. He damn well shouldnât be opening that can of worms while he was on tour. But man, she made him want to.
Jessica hid behind a sponsor sign, her back pressed to the cool plastic. What was she doing? She knew Conner wanted to see her arm and instinctively he wouldnât rest until heâd tracked her down, and yet here she was, hiding from him. Isnât this what she wantedâhim coming to her on his own? She wiped her damp palms on her jeans and raised her eyes to the roof of the arena. Was she strong enough to do this? Was she strong enough to go after what she wanted?
She knew the draft would be starting soon and she had no choice but to face him then. She had to be there to note which bulls got drawn so she could deal with the contractors tomorrow. Grabbing her bag, she peeked out from behind the sign and then darted into the corridor.
âThought you could avoid me?â A silky Texas drawl wound its way around her ear and she jumped.
âC-Conner,â she whispered. Clearing her throat, she continued. âI was going to the draft area.â
âMe too. Iâll walk with you.â He fell into line with her, making his long-legged stride shorter to match hers. âHowâs your arm?â
âFine, truly. Thank you for asking.â She bit her lip and looked away.
âDonât do that.â
Her head whipped around. âDo what?â
âBite your lip. It gives a man ideas.â
âIdeas?â God, she was turning into a parroting idiotâŚ
âYeah, ideas. Ideas me and any other warm-blooded man around here would have after lookinâ at your mouth. I donât like it.â He glanced at her. âDammit! Youâre still doing it.â
She did, and the thought only excited her more. Her sex clenched hard and she gasped at the onslaught of sensation.
He stopped and looked down at her. His eyes blazed with lust and something elseâanger? Was he angry with her? And if so, why?
He took a deep breath and let it out slowly. âIâve never,â he paused and took another breath, âever met a woman like you, Jessica. I hardly know you but you make my blood boil.â He closed his eyes for a second, and when he opened them they had cleared. Her brow lowered in confusion. âBut as much as Iâd like to act on the attraction I feel for you, I canât. I wonât. You work for the tour. I canât get involved with someone whoâs employed by the tour. If it went south my career could be ruined and I canât abide that. Have a good night.â He turned and continued down the hall, his long legs creating distance between them quickly. What had just happened?
Jessica finished her work for the night and called her neighbor Viola to check on her apartment. Viola was watching it for her while she was on tour. Jessicaâs daddy had pitched a fit when sheâd decided to hold on to the place, saying it was stupid for her to spend money on an apartment she wasnât even at eight months out of the year, but Jessica treasured her independence and had dug in her heels.
âHello?â
âViola? You sound tired. Did I wake you?â Viola wasnât old by any stretch of the imagination, but Jessica still felt a little guilty having her bringing in her mail and watering her plants for weeks at a time between the periods Jessica could be at home.
âNo, I was just absorbed in my reading.â
Jessica smiled. Viola went through murder mysteries like most people went through oxygen. âAll right then. How are things?â
âOh, fine. But my life is boring, you know that. Tell me whatâs going on in yours. Did you talk to that boy yet?â
Jessica had told Viola about Conner during her last visit with the woman before leaving for New York City. Sheâd been bursting at the seams wanting to talk about him, and since most of her friends from high school or community college were wrapped up in their own lives she hardly talked to them anymore. Of course, she didnât tell Viola where sheâd met himâshe wasnât ready to discuss her sexual proclivities with anybody, least of all her older friend.
âYes, actually, I did. But it didnât go quite like I expected.â
âWhat do you mean?â
Jessica winced as she recalled Connerâs face. âHe happened along when I was trying to deal with an ornery subcontractor. Theyâre the guys from each farm who handle the bulls. Anyway, this guy is a real jerk. He wasnât cooperating with meâgiving me the information I need, so I threatened to disqualify his bulls. Well, he didnât like that idea at all and grabbed my arm.â
âHe did what?â
âIt wasnât that big a deal. Things like that happen sometimes.â
âDid you report him?â
âNo. If I reported every guy who said or did something offensive Iâd be reporting half the contractors on tour. Itâs just part of life here.â She could feel Violaâs disapproval through the phone line, so she plowed ahead. âAnyway, Conner made me show him my arm. He got this look in his eye and I thought maybe heâd ask me out, but then he turned tail and ran. I donât know what to think now. He seemed almost⌠I donât know, angry or something.â
âThat I canât help you with. I never know what men are thinking. If I did maybe Iâd be married right now.â Jessica made a dismissive noise and Voila laughed.
âThose men donât know what theyâre missing.â
âSo whatâre you gonna do now?â
âI donât know. I guess wait and see how he reacts the next time I see him.â
âProbably as good a plan as any.â
âListen, I should go. Itâs late and Iâm tired. The first event is always kind of crazy with everybody getting used to new rules, new staffâŚâ
âYou take care of yourself, you hear?â
âI promise.â
Jessica ended the call and tossed the phone on the bed. Flopping down next to it, she blew out a loud breath. Why did Conner act so strangely around her? She resolved to find out.
Copyright 2012, Cassandra Carr
BIO:
Cassandra Carr is a multi-published erotic romance writer with Ellora’s Cave, Siren, and Loose Id who lives in Western New York with her husband, Inspiration, and her daughter, Too Cute for Words. When not writing she enjoys watching hockey and hanging out on Twitter. For more information about Cassandra, check out her website at http://www.booksbycassandracarr.com, “like” her Facebook fan page at http://www.facebook.com/AuthorCassandraCarr or follow her on Twitter athttp://www.twitter.com/Cassandra_Carr.
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